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Naruto Rasengan by MrStevenTaylor Naruto Rasengan by MrStevenTaylor
Ok, this is my first go at digital inking an colouring, so please be gentle, but i would like constructive criticism so that i can improve.
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:iconw-mineko:
w-Mineko Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
very nice :)
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so so so so much, really means a lot to me :)
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:iconw-mineko:
w-Mineko Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
:)
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:iconlevenark:
levenark Featured By Owner May 6, 2012
this is very nice and accurate!:D lol!he just fell into a bear trap XDDD
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much, this makes me real happy :) bear trap thing is funny :p
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:iconfirstrecon101:
firstrecon101 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i know this is a year late but i love this
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank yo so much, i really like this piece, want to get as many views on it as possible :)
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:iconanilover10:
anilover10 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
cool
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :)
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:iconanilover10:
anilover10 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ur welcome thanks for the fav
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:iconavrilpunkchick:
avrilpunkchick Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012   Photographer
very good naruto picture
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow, thank, lol, i pimp that picture out lots, lol, trying to get lots of views :p glad you like it, you rock!
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avrilpunkchick Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012   Photographer
thank you so do you
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YeahICreatedEevee Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
O.0
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:iconisnakey:
iSnakey Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
i like how you drew this has a lot of designs:D
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much, cant tell you how happy it makes me reading that :) you rock!!!
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:iconisnakey:
iSnakey Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
your welcome
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:iconthelastparanoid:
TheLastParanoid Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good Work My friend )
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :) thanks lots :)
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:iconthelastparanoid:
TheLastParanoid Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Y*r Welcome And thx FOr Points )
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DerianDavid Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
wow super amazing for a first go i like it *fav* :D keep up the great work!
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ExDarkSkynet Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
It is not bad, if will practise that it will be better)
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:iconfaimi:
Faimi Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really good for a first go. Keep working on it.
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so so much
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:iconfaimi:
Faimi Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sure, no problem.
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MrMooseAss Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
as far as I can see, the shadows are really good! but the background colors are not my taste :) and i think this light bowl should make some light on the character
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the advice, greatly appreciated :)
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Charredsky Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Student Interface Designer
I can only see a few things that look a little off. The background seems strangely desaturated in comparison to the body coloring, and I think the green is throwing me a little off because there is no other green in the picture. The Chakra I think could do with some blending or less opacity or something, to make it more Chakra looking. Right now it looks kind of like a ring of cut paper. The only other things I can see are some small details like the leg-band and collar which could use shading.

Really good for your first try at digital. It took me a while just to find those things, and even then they are minor. Great job! ~Dattebayo!~
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for the advice, greatly appreciated :)

love the dattebayo at the end :)
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:iconcharredsky:
Charredsky Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Student Interface Designer
I thought you would. :)
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ZenIsI Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
pretty cool colourin mate, but the BG is rather too plain and the colours used make it look kinda plain or washed out meh just my point of view lol
just keep colourin them panel boi
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this hurts, cause i think its my best picture, i know your right, an i could have made it better, but i just got to keep trying to get better :)
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ZenIsI Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol thats right dood
funny thing is I still havent completely drawn a picture yet
coz i tend to give up half the way :s
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MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm trying to be more focused, an finish pieces, but its hard :p
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:iconlessah:
lessah Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
You could add some light on the character's body and clothes, generated by the rasengan ^^
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
crap, yeah, i should have thought of that, arghhhhhh, ok im working on new umping rasangan picture, will make sure i add that to picture when i am colouring :) thank you
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lessah Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
HAHAHA, ok ^^

there's an example of one of my drawings, where i did that: [link]

:3
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Yonami Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Okay, here we go.

At first, i don't know why did you asked for a critic, this art is already good by itself. =)

The only things i could say is that you made a nice work with your inkings, a strong hand to make these lines. Your color are very good, and this 'sharp' coloring reminds me of the anime style of colorize, maybe if you add a third tone to each color (a light or a shadow) could fit perfectly to this drawing, increase the size of the strokes outside the character will give you a better result.

You made a good pose here, and the propostions looks okay for me, maybe the proportion between his eyes looks a bit confuse but, it doesn't interfere directly in this art at all.

You also made a nice chromatic composition, leaving a color to cause contrast with the character's colors (up and below).

Well, congratulations mate, you did a great job here =)
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow, thank you, its great to get some useful tips, i think your right about the colours, it needs more, there should be light coming from the rasengan that would effect the tone of the picture, that i did not add to the image, i will work on my eyes, its hard, i kinda been told that there is one eye gap between the eyes, but it seems different with anime/manga, more practice is needed, again, thank you very much for your crit, made me happy, maybe you could check this other pic out an give me some advice please [link]
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Miss-Swan123 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
WOW it looks just like naruto reat job kid =D
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you thats real nice :)
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:iconmiss-swan123:
Miss-Swan123 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Your welcome honey and thank for the :llama:
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:iconthenobody1990:
TheNobody1990 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
Looks great! The rasengan power could be a little brighter, but apart from that, great! :D
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah, i regret the rasengan now :( would like to edit it, but afraid of losing views :p lol im a big wimp :)
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TheNobody1990 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
Don't regret it, that's how we all improve our art :D
Again, great pic!
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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RandomFoxFan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
neet :3
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:iconmrsteventaylor:
MrStevenTaylor Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :)
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RandomFoxFan Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
np :3
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ShadowOfLive Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool :3
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